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@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@
 
 ![CrimeFlarE logo](../image/crimeflare-logo.png)
 
-Are you already aware of the problems?
+Are you already aware of the problems of Cloudflare?
+
 You might want to check:
 - [Alternatives](#alternatives)
 - [Solutions](#solutions)
@@ -28,12 +29,12 @@ clearnet users).
 
 ## Who is Cloudflare?
 
-Cloudflare is the world's largest man-in-the-middle proxy. This means that it 
-sits between you and the server which sent you the pages and images.
+Cloudflare is the world's largest man-in-the-middle proxy. Technically it is called "reverse proxy".
+This means that it sits between you and the server which sent you webpages and images.
 
 Cloudflare is a content delivery network, which means that it has different 
 servers in different locations, so that websites are supposed to be better 
-reachable. This has a bad side.
+reachable. This has some bad sides.
 
 ![](https://codeberg.org/crimeflare/cloudflare-tor/media/branch/master/image/matthew_prince.jpg)
 
@@ -42,11 +43,10 @@ reachable. This has a bad side.
 ### Privacy problems
 #### Single point of failure
 
-Cloudflare goes down from time to time. All the content which uses Cloudflare 
-goes down as well when that happens.
+Cloudflare goes down from time to time.
+All the content which uses Cloudflare goes down as well when that happens.
 
-Read more about the 
-[single point of failure](../subfiles/single-point-of-failure-problem.md).
+Read more about the [single point of failure](../subfiles/single-point-of-failure-problem.md).
 
 ![](https://codeberg.org/crimeflare/cloudflare-tor/media/branch/master/image/cloudflareoutage-2020.jpg)
 
@@ -57,37 +57,34 @@ Cloudflare usually blocks Tor or makes it hard for Tor users to access the
 website or content. Tor is not only for criminals. It is important for many 
 people and everyone has the right on privacy.
 
-Tor is important, read more about 
-[why Tor matters](../subfiles/why-tor-matters.md).
+Tor is important, read more about [why Tor matters](../subfiles/why-tor-matters.md).
 
 Cloudflare often uses Google reCATPCHAs to check if you are human. These
 CAPTCHAs which check if you are human, track you and many claim that they
 even try to find out which human you are.
 
-Read more about the
-[reCAPTCHA problem](../subfiles/recaptcha-problem.md).
+Read more about the [reCAPTCHA problem](../subfiles/recaptcha-problem.md).
 
 
 #### Project Honey Pot
 
-Project Honey Pot is a project which collects a lot of personal data
+"Project Honey Pot" is a project which collects a lot of personal data
 and much of that data is from innocent people who deserve privacy.
-Cloudflare was created by people who worked on that project.
+Cloudflare was created by people who worked on that project. US DHS showed interest to this project.
 
 ![](https://codeberg.org/crimeflare/cloudflare-tor/media/branch/master/image/honeypot.gif)
 
 
 ### Not convenient
 
-Cloudflare is not convenient for many visitors of your site. You will
-lose visitors when you choose Cloudflare. Many people who helped writing
-this file even block Cloudflare.
+Cloudflare is not convenient for many visitors of your site.
+You will lose visitors when you choose Cloudflare.
+Many people who helped writing this file even blocked by Cloudflare.
 
-Did you know that you can lose visitors because your site doesn't load
-in a few seconds?
+Did you know that you can lose visitors because your site doesn't load in a few seconds?
 
-Cloudflare often makes visitors wait for a few seconds. Many visitors will
-leave your site when they see this.
+Cloudflare often makes visitors wait for more than few seconds.
+Many visitors will just leave your site when they see this.
 
 ![](https://codeberg.org/crimeflare/cloudflare-tor/media/branch/master/image/onemorestep.jpg)
 
@@ -95,8 +92,7 @@ leave your site when they see this.
 ### Other problems
 
 There are other problems as well, but we want to keep this file simple.
-Those problems are listed in
-[another file](../subfiles/more-cloudflare-problems.md).
+Those problems are listed in [another file](../subfiles/more-cloudflare-problems.md).
 
 
 ## Cloudflare Alternatives
@@ -136,5 +132,6 @@ You can check them out and share them.
 ---
 
 Still not convinced? That's fine.
+
 Just know that many people won't be able to use your content or website.
 Cloudflare works against you.