diff --git a/docs/signup.md b/docs/signup.md index f8b0b24485..97cd20a423 100644 --- a/docs/signup.md +++ b/docs/signup.md @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ We get a 400: ### Step 2: entering email -User is proposed to enter an email. We skip this step. +User is proposed to enter an email. User skips this step. ```shell script curl -X POST --data $'{"auth":{"session":"xptUYoREDACTEDogOWAGVnbJQ","type":"m.login.dummy"}}' 'https://matrix.org/_matrix/client/r0/register' @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ curl -X POST --data $'{"auth":{"session":"xptUYoREDACTEDogOWAGVnbJQ","type":"m.l } ``` -### Step 2 bis: we enter an email +### Step 2 bis: user enters an email We request a token to the homeserver. The `client_secret` is generated by the application @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ curl -X POST --data $'{"auth":{"threepid_creds":{"client_secret":"53e679ea-oRED- } ``` -We click on the link received by email `https://matrix.org/_matrix/client/unstable/registration/email/submit_token?token=vtQjQIZfwdoREDACTEDozrmKYSWlCXsJ&client_secret=53e679ea-oRED-ACTED-92b8-3012c49c6cfa&sid=qlBCREDACTEDEtgxD` which contains: +User clicks on the link received by email `https://matrix.org/_matrix/client/unstable/registration/email/submit_token?token=vtQjQIZfwdoREDACTEDozrmKYSWlCXsJ&client_secret=53e679ea-oRED-ACTED-92b8-3012c49c6cfa&sid=qlBCREDACTEDEtgxD` which contains: - A `token` vtQjQIZfwdoREDACTEDozrmKYSWlCXsJ - The `client_secret`: 53e679ea-oRED-ACTED-92b8-3012c49c6cfa - A `sid`: qlBCREDACTEDEtgxD @@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ Some homeservers may require the user to enter MSISDN. On matrix.org, it's not required, and not even optional, but it's still possible for the app to add a MSISDN during the registration. -The user enter a phone number and select a country, the `client_secret` is generated by the application +The user enters a phone number and selects a country, the `client_secret` is generated by the application ```shell script curl -X POST --data $'{"client_secret":"d3e285f6-972a-496c-9a22-7915a2db57c7","send_attempt":1,"country":"FR","phone_number":"+33611223344"}' 'https://matrix.org/_matrix/client/r0/register/msisdn/requestToken' @@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ If it is not the case, the homeserver send the SMS and returns some data, especi } ``` -When you execute the register request, with the received `sid`, you get an error since the MSISDN is not validated yet: +When we execute the register request, with the received `sid`, we get an error since the MSISDN is not validated yet: ```shell script curl -X POST --data $'{"auth":{"type":"m.login.msisdn","session":"xptUYoREDACTEDogOWAGVnbJQ","threepid_creds":{"client_secret":"d3e285f6-972a-496c-9a22-7915a2db57c7","sid":"1678881798"}}}' 'https://matrix.org/_matrix/client/r0/register' @@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ curl -X POST --data $'{"auth":{"type":"m.login.msisdn","session":"xptUYoREDACTED } ``` -Now the homeserver consider that the `m.login.msisdn` step is completed (401): +Now the homeserver considers that the `m.login.msisdn` step is completed (401): ```json {