From b43b827fefdbe34165ff71e53de0d88c954abd55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bleak Grey <bleakgrey@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 10 Sep 2020 21:56:34 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] Update app description

Kudos to @herag@dobbs.town!
---
 data/com.github.bleakgrey.tootle.appdata.xml.in | 11 ++++-------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/data/com.github.bleakgrey.tootle.appdata.xml.in b/data/com.github.bleakgrey.tootle.appdata.xml.in
index e63dd30..d1e0fdc 100644
--- a/data/com.github.bleakgrey.tootle.appdata.xml.in
+++ b/data/com.github.bleakgrey.tootle.appdata.xml.in
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- Copyright 2018 bleak_grey <bleakgrey@gmail.com> -->
+<!-- Copyright 2020 bleak_grey <bleakgrey@gmail.com> -->
 <component type="desktop">
   <id>com.github.bleakgrey.tootle</id>
   <metadata_license>CC0-1.0</metadata_license>
@@ -9,13 +9,10 @@
 
   <description>
     <p>
-      Tootle is a client for the world’s largest free, open-source, decentralized microblogging network with real-time notifications and support for multiple accounts.
+      Tootle is a GTK client for the world's largest, decentralized, microblogging platform, Mastodon. With the user experience in mind, it provides a clean, native interface that allows you to integrate Mastodon's social experience seamlessly with your desktop environment.
     </p>
     <p>
-      Mastodon is lovingly crafted with power and speed in mind, resulting in a free, independent, and popular alternative to the centralized social networks.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      Anyone can run a Mastodon server. Each server hosts individual user accounts, the content they produce, and the content to which they are subscribed. Every user can follow each other and share their posts regardless of their server.
+      Mastodon is a free and open source microblogging platform similar to Twitter, but with user privacy and decentralization in mind. It is one of many protocols that interacts with the Fediverse of protocols like Pleroma, GNU Social, and others. The power of federated microblogging that Mastodon brings and the agility of Tootle creates a fantastic duo for all of your social media needs.
     </p>
   </description>
 
@@ -71,7 +68,7 @@
     <release version="1.0.0-alpha1" date="2020-09-10">
         <description>
            <ul>
-              <li>New app icon (kudos to Tobias Bernard!)</li>
+              <li>New app icon (Kudos to Tobias Bernard!)</li>
               <li>New interface design</li>
               <li>Fixed bugs</li>
           </ul>